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Chris Gi 08.10.2009 12:19

Please check the translation
 
We need your help checking English translations. Because none of the core team members are native English speakers, we kindly ask for your help. We will occasionally post some rough translation. Please check for typos, bad syntax or wording, and post the corrections.

If you have additional suggestions for BBS-News, missions, sector/ship/station names, please use this thread: Post your ideas!

Chris Gi 08.10.2009 13:43

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Ok, I begin with the description of the new Boron flagship, the Boron Anari, a M0 class ship:

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The ships of the Anari class are the largest and strongest ships in the Boronen fleet. Developed after the Split war, their existence was kept secret for a long time. The prototype of this class was first seen in the Boron East-Colonies Battle under the command iof Hila Na. It led the Boron ships to a glorious victory over the Split. This sector was named "Hilas Joy" to honour Commander Hila Na.
This ship class is named after the Anari whale occuring on the Boron origin planet. Almost nothing is known of this whale. Expeditions could prove their existence, however they always succeeded to withdraw themselves from closer investigations. That's why the Anari is considered as highly intelligent. In addition, no hostile action of this whale was ever observed. Thus this whale became the symbol of Boron character: intelligent and peace-loving.

Graceburn 09.10.2009 23:50

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The ships of the Anari class are the largest and strongest ships in the Boron fleet. Developed after the Split war, their existence was kept secret for a long time. The prototype of this class was first seen in the Boron East-Colonies Battle under the command of Hila Na. It led the Boron to a glorious victory over the Split. This sector was named "Hilas Joy" to honour Commander Hila Na.
This ship class is named after the Anari whale native to the Boron home planet. Almost nothing is known of this whale. Expeditions could prove their existence, however they always managed to withdraw themselves from closer investigations. That's why the Anari is considered as highly intelligent. In addition, no hostile action of this whale was ever observed. Thus this whale became the symbol of Boron character: intelligent and peace-loving

Good work, some minor grammar mistakes, but ^ thats fixed up

Chris Gi 10.10.2009 00:23

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Fixed!
Thank you :D.

Shadow dream 10.10.2009 01:09

AW: Please check the translation
 
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Originally Posted by Translation
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Originally Posted by Bordcomputer
Teladi Argentavis
The Argentavis-Class is the largest and mightiest shipclasses from the Teladian Tradefederation ever seen. It can be compared to a mobile station with enormous cargo and hangar. During wars it is used as command-center and flagship.
Originaly the Argentavis-class was made to be an upgrade-version of the Albatross-class [The Teladi TL]. Since the planed cargo-upgrade up to giga-level was impossible, a new ship was created.
On command of Ceo that model had been enlarged until neither the planed shields nor the weaponsystem was able to defend the ship efficiently. Therefor unknown ammounts of Credits where spent to upgrade the equipment so that the Ship was able to defend itself. Because of it's size several Shipyards where needed to build it. Officialy three shipyards worked together for this project.

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Originally Posted by Bordcomputer
Teladi Mesa
The Teladi Mesa is the destroyer of the Tradefederation and has been named after a bird that lives on the teladian planets.
Equiped with several frontlasers and a huge main-gun it uses to be a great threat.
It has three of the new developed engines that were specialy designed for larger ships. Based on high-energetic spheres that are controled by magnetic fields, it is possible to regulate a stream-output [how can I best say that some kind of energy-beam is regulated?]. This may enable higher speeds but affects the agility negatively. Therefor this Ship is only an efficiant weapon in the hands of an experienced captain.

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Originally Posted by Bordcomputer
Teladi Pigeon
This light fighter has been designed to reach high speeds and a good agility. Equiped with 2 mid-heavy lasers it still may be a threat. However the cargo can only hold the shields and the lasers.

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Originally Posted by Bordcomputer
Teladi Trading station
The cheap and uncomfortable built Trading stations turned out to be a customer killer. Therefor the Teladi try to get their customers back in using a much more comfortable Trading station. The large ammount of rooms, several Office-rooms and even baths enable the travelers to get their buisness done and offer a fine stay for usual customers. Since this station seems to be one of the most popular stations in the Universe the higher prices don't seem to bother.

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Originally Posted by Bordcomputer
Teladi Pelikan
The Teladi Pelikan is the second TS from the Tradefederation. This ship is equiped with the latest compression-tech to raise the capacity of the large cargo.
Since this TS uses a small version of the CAP-engines it reaches a very high top-speed but still there is a low agility.
Since the high speeds endanger the hull of the ship a new shild-type was invented to block materials before it was able to reach the hull. This shield is used on every Pelican but some disadvantages are that severe that a use on other ships is impossible jet.


I know, it's a lot, but I haven't even translated everything I have written jet :P The textes between [ and ] are not for translation but to explain what I would like to say ;)

Shadow

Lord Dakier 10.10.2009 01:25

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I speak fluent English unless I've had a few beers :D

Graceburn 10.10.2009 08:05

Re: Please check the translation
 
Teladi Argentavis
The Argentavis-Class is the largest and mightiest shipclasse from the Teladian Tradefederation ever seen. It can be compared to a mobile station with enormous cargo bays and a hangar. During war it is used as command-center and flagship.
Originaly the Argentavis-class was made to be an upgraded version of the Albatross-class [The Teladi TL]. Since the planned cargo-upgrade up to giga-level was impossible, a new ship was created.
On command of the Teladi CEO that model had been enlarged until neither the planned shields or weapons system was able to defend the ship efficiently. Therefor unknown amounts of Credits were spent to upgrade the equipment so that the ship was able to defend itself. Because of its size several Shipyards were needed to build it. Officialy three shipyards worked together for this project.
EDIT:
Teladi Mesa
The Teladi Mesa is the destroyer of the Tradefederation and has been named after a bird that lives on the teladian planets.
It is equiped with several frontlasers and a huge main-gun it uses to be a great threat.
It has three newly developed engines that were specifically designed for larger ships. Based on high-energetic spheres that are controled by magnetic fields, it is possible to regulate a stream-output. This may enable higher speeds but affects the agility negatively. Therefore this Ship is only an efficient weapon in the hands of an experienced captain.
EDIT:
Teladi Pigeon
This light fighter has been designed to reach high speeds and has a good agility. Eqquiped with 2 mid-heavy lasers it is still a considerable threat. However the cargo bay can only hold the shields and the lasers.
EDIT:
Teladi Trading station
The cheap and uncomfortable built Trading stations turned out to be a customer killer. Therefore the Teladi tried to get their customers back in by designing a much more comfortable Trading station. The large amount of rooms, several offices and even bathrooms enable travelers to get their buisness done and offer a fine stay for usual customers. Since this station seems to be one of the most popular stations in the Universe the higher prices don't seem to bother customers.
EDIT:
Teladi Pelican
The Teladi Pelican is the second TS from the Tradefederation. This ship is eqquiped with the latest compression-technology to raise the capacity of the already large cargo bay.
Since this TS uses a smaller version of the Capital ship engines it reaches a very high top-speed but there is dtill a low agility.
Since the high speeds endanger the hull of the ship a new shield type was invented to block materials before they were able to collide with the hull. This shield is used on every Pelican but some disadvantages are that severe that a use on other ships is impossible jet.

Graceburn 29.04.2010 09:34

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Any Further translations i'm happy to help with too, and i'm gonna work on some new bbs stories too

Chris Gi 29.04.2010 12:46

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Yea, we have a lot of stuff in pipeline, but the German texts are not finished yet... But there will be a lot of stuff... of course, some will only be available in restricted sections :D

Graceburn 01.05.2010 05:27

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Well i think i've got access to all those anyway, so no problem there, just the language barrier!


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